How to make my ted talk better

Adler Demac

Mrs. Guarino

December 3rd, 2015

Public speaking


                                                              The best ted talk ever


               My ted talk is on the best looking quarterback ever, who is that you might ask? You guessed it, the legend himself, Tom Brady. But as we come closer to presenting our ted talks, it seems clear I have some polishing up to do. I will be focusing mostly on how tom Brady went against all odds, and went on to become the greatest quarterback of all time. It doesn't matter what challenge or obstacle you put in his way, he always seems to come out on top. I will use more specific examples, like how he was not being looked at by many colleges coming out of high school. Or how he was the 4th string qb going into his freshman year at Michigan, or even when he tore his acl in 2008. But first, I will give a little background on tom Brady and how he was a small town kid from San Mateo California. And how his first love was not football, but baseball. But the one thing I think I need to work on his how, and when I talk about how tom Brady overcame challenges in his life. It's not that I'm not sure what I'm going to say, but how I'm going to organize my ted talk. I think what I will end up doing is introduce my topic as " how tom Brady overcame challenges and obsticals in his life" but then I will talk for a minute or two on his achievements and statistics. Then I will jump right into how he did all this with all the odds against him. I will talk about his work ethic, and dedication got him to where he is today, and why he is such an inspiration to me and so many other people around the world. I also need to add a couple more pictures. After I have chosen all my pictures, I also need to practice my ted talk a few times so I will be able to time up my pictures with my speech and be more comfortable and confident.